Toby

That's the name of my newest creation. He's quite fun. I've also managed to finish the first draft, and it looks like once I finish the first round of editing and adding a few things I missed, it will be b/w 55-60k words.

I checked out a book called "The first five pages" which is written by a lit agent detailing how to basically stay out of the rejection pile. It's a really good read, and has a number of things to be sure not to do. Right now on round 1 of editing, aside from spelling / grammar errors, I'm mainly looking out for adj / adv usage. The second pass will probably then focus on dialogue issues.

Anywho, I should get going to see my dead people.